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The Street of Misguided Dreams by ~mazuko:iconmazuko:

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The Street of Misguided Dreams
December 4, 2002

The street of misguided dreams
It's light beckons
It's darkness shrouds

Faces hidden
Behind yellowed panes of tainted glass
Glass so thickly colored
It hides what lies within

The faces of dreams stored away
They look upon me
As I walk down this dank street
But I can not look upon them

Their screams of warning
Lay silent behind locked doors
My dreams they are running

Running from the darkness
They are running from the dark depths of my mind
They are running down the street of misguided dreams

To a place where dreams go to die
To a place where dreams go to hide
A place with yellowed windows
Along a dark street

To a place of lost realities
Shrouded in the darkness of mystery
©2002-2009 ~mazuko
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I was doing some soul searching tonight and I stumbled upon this piece by winterwings found here: [link]

It inspired me to write this poem, alot of art work here on deviantart has been inspiring me to write lately. I thank all of you that have inspired me for sharing your works with all of us here on deviant art. It has really helped me to express thoughts I usually share with no one.

I thank you all again.
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~winterwings:iconwinterwings: Dec 4, 2002, 9:36:56 PM
Holy CRAP, man! I'm so amazed and flattered and excited. As soon as I read your comment, I started frantically telling my girlfriend what you'd done... and then I came here and read it-- it's perfect. I dunno what to say-- I can't get the jumble of words out. Just that connection between artists is VERY cool... and I'm just speechless. I'll prolly come back to make a better comment when I calm down.

But in the meantime, Big Bad +fav ! :D (Big Grin)

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~freakiemunkie:iconfreakiemunkie: Dec 4, 2002, 10:22:23 PM
wow I really like this I think its great! very inspiring...
=blinkdabunny:iconblinkdabunny: Dec 4, 2002, 11:08:07 PM
That's really kickass. It fits his piece so well. Amazing way of writing words. Just amazing!

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~spittle:iconspittle: Dec 6, 2002, 10:45:01 AM
wow, I found that kinda' sad. "A place of lost realities," that line fits perfectly with the whole theme of failed dreams. Very cool.
~infiltrator15:iconinfiltrator15: Dec 6, 2002, 8:42:13 PM
yep, this definitely suits winterwings' piece of work, and very well written, i really enjoyed reading it. extremely capturing.

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~tenyasha:icontenyasha: Dec 8, 2002, 10:55:48 PM
really like this peice!
~fallacies:iconfallacies: Jan 3, 2003, 12:15:44 AM
A lovely piece, it moans deep in marrow, you can hear screams behind it echoing hollowly. I think it is a bit short of imagery, and yet what it does have and the words that are there, are so invoking.

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